Monday, 3 June 2013

Man in a Castle.




In a suit of armour inside a cold stone castle.
A man waits.
The armour is stiff and hard when he tries to move.
In the tower he spies through the narrow vizar.
He feels freezing cold in his metal suit of clothes.
He can hear the screams of children.
Mother’s shouting for their husbands.
An invasion.
Fear grows from his feet to his head.
A man waits.
In a suit of armour inside a cold stone castle.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             




Success Criteria
  • To write in a poetry style that has been given.
  • To treat each word as important, constantly improve words and cut superfluous words. 
  • Use high level word vocabulary that comes from our chosen topic.
  • To proofread to a higher level on our Proofreading rubric.
  • To design a montage to match your poem using layering, masking and alpha tools.
  • To present within your blog.

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