Monday, 3 June 2013

Bottle the Blue Boat.


On a stately blue boat inside a bottle

a black flag flies angrily with a skull and crossbones.
I stand like a soldier
tired and cold up in the crow’s nest.
Looking, scanning, gazing out through the clear glass.
Rocking, shaking from side to side by a huge hand.
Placed carefully on the window sill.
All is still and silent.
On a stately blue boat inside a bottle.





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